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Jul 27, 2013 19:50 | #1

Please let me know what you think, what you would have done differently.
Below conversion and original photo, a snap shot of a friend of my daughter. Thank you for looking,
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1/500 sec; f/1.8; ISO 100

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Jul 28, 2013 00:51 | #2

loose a little more on the right side...

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Jul 29, 2013 13:08 | #3

I think you made a big improvement. Personally, I like the crop. I would not try to center her, and I would not try to push her to fit the rule of thirds in this case. Perhaps just a little sharpness filter to bring in a little more detail in her hair.

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Jul 30, 2013 18:18 | #4

I like the tight crop the way it is. Good job!

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Jul 31, 2013 08:37 | #5

Nice conversion, great timing. The crop looks good to me. If anything I might trim a bit off the left side.

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Jul 31, 2013 14:05 | #6

Thank you for your comments. I've been browsing the B&W section, looking at many of the photos my reaction is WOW! when will I be there? but is encouraging and I'm learning a lot just looking other people photos.

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