Senior Portraits Preview.

Anyone catch the girls name?

Really nice shot and good focus on the eyes - just a shame about the huge type! (Plus it reads as your business is called Taylor Smith Senior Portraits!)

Yea......the giant type...I don't quite understand that.

I think it would have been a better shot had you been able to see her left eye. I would remove the tiny sunspots on her face and it also appears a little hot....at least her top and hat are.

Yeah the picture is pretty good but I am also very confused about the giant type. If that is her name, why does it say Senior Portraits underneath? It reads like it is the banner for her company.

I caught her name too and had to do a double-take.

Other than the name. maybe it's just me, it's the gray stars.
I use ebay alot and looks like it's a rating system 0 (gray stars) to yellow (5 yellow, great seller). Don't take offense by this. it's just what I saw right away.

Guys... this is obviously an AD banner. focus on the photography.... not the big text. LOL

PhilF wrote in post #16174499
Guys... this is obviously an AD banner. focus on the photography.... not the big text. LOL

Why not just post the photo on its own?

I really like the shot but I just think that showing it this way isn't the best!

Water mark aside, it's been my experience that straw-type hats will let little spots of light fall onto the face, causing nasty distractions. I think your location works, the framing, lighting and the pose look good, although I would have tipped the hat back just a bit to show all of her left eye.

Thank you everyone! Sorry about the text, it is a ad banner for my website that will direct you to the series. I should have posted the photo without the text, my apologizes! But I appreciate the feedback, will definitely put it into consideration next time!