tanz1983 Member 130 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: milton, fl More info | Aug 01, 2013 11:45 | #1 I cannot put my finger on what is wrong with this picture. Can someone give me a creative insight? I cannot post in glam yet so I am here.  Image hosted by forum (658009) © tanz1983 [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. 1D mk II/ XTI gripped/ AE-1 35 mm/ Mamiya TLR/ 580exII/ 50 mm prime/ 70-200mm L f2.4/ 50mm prime FD/ 70-210 FD/ 28mm prime FD/ Fong Dome/ lots of other cool crap
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HiepBuiPhotography Goldmember 1,612 posts Likes: 2 Joined Mar 2012 Location: Harrisburg, PA More info | Aug 01, 2013 12:11 | #2 Her head's too big compared to her arms. Don't use a wide angle for these type of shots. Hiep Bui Photography | Harrisburg Wedding Photographer
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Aug 01, 2013 13:24 | #3 the light is too harsh and hot, the pose is unflattering, the lens choice doesn't help, the dof is neither shallow enough or large enough, distracting shadows, eyes out of focus... Canon 5d mkii | Canon 17-40/4L | Tamron 24-70/2.8 | Canon 85/1.8 | Canon 135/2L
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rivas8409 Goldmember  2,500 posts Likes: 586 Joined Mar 2011 Location: Lemoore, California More info | Aug 01, 2013 15:28 | #4 I agree that her head appears too big as a result of too wide a focal length. I think that's the biggest issue with it. Body: Canon 5DmkII│Canon M50
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Aug 01, 2013 16:29 | #5 thanks guys. I will try with another lens at a shallow DOF 1D mk II/ XTI gripped/ AE-1 35 mm/ Mamiya TLR/ 580exII/ 50 mm prime/ 70-200mm L f2.4/ 50mm prime FD/ 70-210 FD/ 28mm prime FD/ Fong Dome/ lots of other cool crap
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Pirate4 Senior Member 693 posts Likes: 14 Joined Apr 2011 Location: Southern California More info | Aug 01, 2013 16:31 | #6 looking at her eyes, it looks like the light is set to high and to close Canon 7D
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