First time shooting friends

This is the first time I was shooting people, so I dont have any experience at it.
I would like to get some tips and feedback.

I like the sun burst on #1

Im glad you do

I enjoy the burst as well..
Really pretty girl, but the burst might be a little too close to her mouth and making itmlook a little stange.
2nd looks a little flat, but cool capture.
Love her hair!!

I agree with you about the sun burst
thanks

Very pretty young lady and nice shots. I checked out your DeviantART page and if your only 16 and shooting like that already, your gonna be good. Real good

Thank you very much for these kind words, you made me smile.