G'Day, Andrew!
I love the image! It is ghostly. Lovely composition.
However, given you asked for comments and/or feedback, I'll give some additional feedback.
I live in Virginia, just outside of DC. This could easily pass as a typical morning around here with ground fog, especially around autumn. It looks very similar, calm, quiet, docile. You don't want that for this photo.
I imagine you went b&w because it looked better than color. Were it me, I'd have probably done the same thing. I'd also take it another step. I'd make a virtual copy and play with it in color, working with redish orange hues. I'd try to make it look as if this had been a fire, which it had. Google "forest fires" and look at what you can find. Try a version with those types of colors. Make it come alive, make it a bit disturbing which it would have been. Show me this was a fire.