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First Attempt of Milky Way (Alabama Hills, CA)

 
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Aug 21, 2013 12:20 |  #1

This is my first attempt to capture the night skies and the Milky Way. Suggestion, comments, and critiques are welcome and appreciated.
Exif: iso 5000, 30 sec, 14mm, f2.8 (Canon 6D, Rokinon FE14M-C 14mm F2.8)

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Aug 21, 2013 13:21 |  #2

nice job, that camera really devours the photons!


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Aug 21, 2013 14:58 |  #3

awesome shot . Great work


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Aug 21, 2013 14:59 |  #4

Very nice


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Aug 21, 2013 16:23 |  #5

Did you use a flashlight to paint the rocks? If so, I'd maybe try going a bit further down them next time. But, that said, it's a great photo as it is.


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Aug 21, 2013 20:07 |  #6

Snydremark wrote in post #16228336 (external link)
Did you use a flashlight to paint the rocks? If so, I'd maybe try going a bit further down them next time. But, that said, it's a great photo as it is.

Yes, there were other that was taken, that the foreground was painted more. But for some reason, I seem to like the mood better on this.


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Aug 21, 2013 21:45 |  #7

Loved it.
Must enlarge on canvas for hanging on that big wall at home.
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Aug 22, 2013 11:54 |  #8

Snydremark wrote in post #16228336 (external link)
Did you use a flashlight to paint the rocks? If so, I'd maybe try going a bit further down them next time. But, that said, it's a great photo as it is.

The MW is beautiful, for me there is too much dark area at the bottom.




  
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Aug 23, 2013 00:58 as a reply to  @ the jimmy's post |  #9

On the first shot it looks as if you overexposed too much where you blew out the details on the MW, and the light painting makes the hills/rocks look fake. I really like the second one better, overall, more natural landscape, better exposure of the MW. Hey, great job for your 1st attempt! :D




  
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Aug 23, 2013 05:22 |  #10

spotz04 wrote in post #16232476 (external link)
On the first shot it looks as if you overexposed too much where you blew out the details on the MW, and the light painting makes the hills/rocks look fake. I really like the second one better, overall, more natural landscape, better exposure of the MW. Hey, great job for your 1st attempt! :D

Agreed - The second one is my pick too. Off to a great start!

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Aug 27, 2013 13:13 |  #11

I really like the second image a lot. If you could bring out some more detail in the foreground, it would defintely lead the viewers eyes toward the sky in the background.




  
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Aug 30, 2013 12:41 |  #12

Just awesome shots, I need to get to a dark place!


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Aug 30, 2013 15:02 |  #13

cracking shot




  
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