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Jan 26, 2006 12:18 |  #1

comments for improvment please (other than the lens flare)


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Jan 26, 2006 13:11 |  #2

Straighter horizontal water line.........maybe a little contrast and a hint of sharpening?? Maybe some saturation but not much. Crop the grass off of the bottom........

It looks good though.:)


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Jan 26, 2006 15:49 |  #3

The water line is fine, if you straigthened it, the trees would be tilting. It's not a horizon, it doesn't need to be straight.


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Jan 26, 2006 15:51 as a reply to  @ usukshooter's post |  #4

Water looks like it runs up hill to me???:confused:


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Jan 26, 2006 16:12 |  #5

Not much to improve- good exposure- you have good detail in the trees and the mountain side. If I had to suggest something I'd recommend a slightly different composition- maybe have the shoreline at the far left of the frame and a greater view of the lake and mountain range to the right. This would give a better feeling of depth to the shot and you would feel the great expanse of the scene better.


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