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Aug 27, 2013 21:21 |  #1

Did a mini photo shoot with my friend Lindsey the other day and this was one of the first pics I edited. Not sure what looks "best".

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Aug 27, 2013 21:48 |  #2

B&W or the reduced saturation gets my vote (try the same darker vignette on that as the B&W has). I'd try to clone out those couple bright blobs in the background (left near the pillar, and far right) - as well as just the hint of blue dress right behind the elbow. Hope to see a few from the rest of the shoot when you get them done.


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Aug 27, 2013 22:19 |  #3

cuda2k wrote in post #16245922 (external link)
B&W or the reduced saturation gets my vote (try the same darker vignette on that as the B&W has). I'd try to clone out those couple bright blobs in the background (left near the pillar, and far right) - as well as just the hint of blue dress right behind the elbow. Hope to see a few from the rest of the shoot when you get them done.

Awesome thanks!
It's always better to have a fresh set of eyes. I'll be finishing the edit this week hopefull and try to get more posted.


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Aug 27, 2013 23:04 as a reply to  @ tbsguy18's post |  #4

I really like the black and white!! Great shot!
I did a little editing to get more contrast....

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Aug 27, 2013 23:10 |  #5

reefvilla wrote in post #16246080 (external link)
I really like the black and white!! Great shot!
I did a little editing to get more contrast....

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More contrast looks better :)


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Aug 27, 2013 23:12 as a reply to  @ tbsguy18's post |  #6

Fixed the blobs and the blue behind her elbow. And added a darker vignette

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Aug 27, 2013 23:15 |  #7

Looks good. The only thing I don't like is the way her head is facing and her stiff arm. The arm needs to be bent.


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Aug 28, 2013 00:32 |  #8

I like the saturated, full color version. Color and light look pretty good, don't care for the vignette. And her left arm is over straightened to a reverse position. Looks almost like it's broken.


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Aug 28, 2013 06:15 |  #9

I like the full saturation color too. And I'd add that in that pose having some eye contact would be good too. Lovely model you have there. Keep shooting and posting more of her.


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Aug 28, 2013 07:17 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #10

I have a few more in this pose where she's facing the camera. I'll get those edited and uploaded. It's funny that people have been mentioning her arm cause she said the same thing while we were shooting. She's double jointed and warned me that it might happen. Just didn't notice till after the fact lol.


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Aug 28, 2013 10:13 |  #11

I like #2, without the heavy vignette.




  
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Aug 28, 2013 10:24 |  #12

The way these are, I prefer the colour but I would have converted the black and white with more contrast and no vignette. For all, I also would have cloned out the light in the back and cropped in closer (for some reason the roof over her head bothers me more than the bent arm) ex:

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Aug 29, 2013 10:49 |  #13

I don't care for the pose and think that Spike44's version is the best. Really like the border, also.




  
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Aug 29, 2013 12:24 as a reply to  @ mark48's post |  #14

Titus213 wrote in post #16246238 (external link)
I like the saturated, full color version. Color and light look pretty good, don't care for the vignette. And her left arm is over straightened to a reverse position. Looks almost like it's broken.

Agree with Dave. I also hate the squat in a pose, it just looks so unnatural. The full color is lovely.


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Aug 29, 2013 13:11 |  #15

Not a fan of the pose but I like the desaturated look. Maybe bump up the vibrance a bit?


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