Brandon,
It's hard to say, once you set up an online shop, it's sales that make it. For instance, I don't like the ''the touch'' image, I find it overtly processed and the lens flare is somewhat cheesy, however, people looking for religious iconographic photos are probably very into it.
When setting up a shop it's usually a good idea to know your target market and run with it; there are some decent landscapes and travel shots there and some photos that don't seem to belong (like the long johns, the christ one, the cars, the bird); it looks more like a portfolio that is thrown together out of all the shots you like the best rather than a well thought out, targeted sales pitch.
The about me seems rather spare, you offer little or no information about yourself as a photographer, why you captured these images or any back-story behind them. Although it's not required, this will also help sell you (because after all, in an internet awash with photos, selling yourself as much as the image is important) to prospective clients.
Lastly, I don't know of the viability of etsy as a photography website.... Although I've heard success stories with other businesses I've not heard of any photographic ones (likely because I haven't looked, but none are being trumpeted in any of the ads/articles I've read about etsy) I'd possibly look at marketing your photos on more than one site to ''avoid putting all your eggs in one basket''.