I apologize for cross-posting... I only found the business thread after posting in the general photography talk forum. Below is the response I made to the thread there. Free free to merge these threads and thanks to everyone curtious enough to provide feedback 
"Thank you all so much for the excellent feedback! I'm taking it all very seriously and will try to expand my bio. Creating a business on Etsy isn't an easy task and requires a great deal of marketing/managing your site. Yes, I've already made some good sales and my shop has only been open a week. From what I've read, it's normally a 2-3 week process before your first sales come through. In that sense, I definitely feel ahead of the game but know there is a great deal more work to be done. Thanks again for the encouragement and I'll try to update this thread with my progress in a couple of months. In the meantime, if others have feedback on my site design and images, it would be greatly appreciated. "