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Sep 07, 2013 13:57 |  #16

How about some re-decorating?

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and with a slight vignette:


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Sep 07, 2013 14:17 |  #17

SVThuh wrote in post #16275186 (external link)
Image editing is now turned on. I never thought to turn it on..

I like the feedback and I have messed with it a bit more.. How does this catch your eyes? Im trying to keep the brightness down a bit, which is difficult. If I set the white point to the whites of her eyes, it gets really blown out everywhere else.

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Sep 07, 2013 17:23 as a reply to  @ stillinamerica's post |  #18

Here's my try. Using CS6, I adjusted white balance, contrast and darkened the background in relation to her face to make it appear brighter.

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Sep 07, 2013 17:33 |  #19

Here's my go...

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Sep 07, 2013 17:42 |  #20

navydoc wrote in post #16276964 (external link)
Here's my try. Using CS6, I adjusted white balance, contrast and darkened the background in relation to her face to make it appear brighter.

Now that is a nice edit, even though on my screen the white of her eyes looks still a bit blue-ish, especially the left eye (her right). But lovely. Well done, Gene.
The other edits all look bad to very bad to down right hideous!


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Sep 07, 2013 18:30 |  #21

Levina de Ruijter wrote in post #16277008 (external link)
Now that is a nice edit, even though on my screen the white of her eyes looks still a bit blue-ish, especially the left eye (her right). But lovely. Well done, Gene.
The other edits all look bad to very bad to down right hideous!

Thanks Levina. I didn't want to go overboard when I lightened her eyes. I think it can look fake if the whites are too white so I tried to stay conservative.

For the fun of it, here's the original as it transforms into the edited version.

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Sep 07, 2013 18:51 |  #22

^^^ Nice! :)


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Sep 07, 2013 19:33 |  #23

navydoc - very nice edit, very natural looking.


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Sep 07, 2013 20:12 as a reply to  @ navydoc's post |  #24

Very nice indeed Navydoc.. Thats good stuff right there!




  
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Sep 07, 2013 21:27 |  #25

I didn't care for the partial head showing on the lower left and thought the background on the right was a little busy, so I cropped it to an 8 X 10 portrait orientation. I also thought the background was a little nervous, so applied a little "lens blur" to smooth it out a little.
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Sep 07, 2013 22:22 |  #26

I think we are all loosing the purpose of the shot, and my vote goes for bob_r




  
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Sep 07, 2013 22:38 |  #27

Good idea for a fun thread though. Someone posts a shot, people come in and edit it however they want to improve it, and after a week, the original; person chooses a winner, who posts the next shot.


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Sep 08, 2013 00:54 as a reply to  @ Tiberius's post |  #28

Maybe this should get moved to the competition thread? lol. I am really enjoying seeing the different edits.. I wish my PS skills were as strong as my FCP skills.




  
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Sep 08, 2013 10:12 as a reply to  @ SVThuh's post |  #29

Gene, that is a sweet thing you did there with the differences moving..and the edit is great. I did a B&W I sent ..


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Sep 10, 2013 04:00 |  #30

I've started a competition thread based on this idea. It's HERE.


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