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Sep 08, 2013 03:05 |  #1

Appreciate C&C of this shot. I am thinking it may look better with a little less sky.


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Sep 08, 2013 03:13 |  #2

looks a bit too dark at the bottom to me.. :/...
A little less sky @ the top would be nice.. :)


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Sep 08, 2013 07:02 |  #3

I'd go the other way and have a little less mud. Crop some off the bottom up to the waterline of the leftmost pillar.


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Sep 08, 2013 07:10 as a reply to  @ Tmz_99's post |  #4

Made some adjustments...better?


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Sep 08, 2013 07:38 |  #5

Nope. Now you've got the horizon almost centered. Try my suggestion of less mud.


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Sep 08, 2013 10:59 |  #6

If he eliminates some of the mud, he'll cut off the pilings, which I think would make it worse? I'd crop out the sky to the middle of that cloud on the right, and see how that goes. That should bring the horizon to almost the top third, eliminate the blue sky, bring more drama to the overall.


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Sep 08, 2013 11:01 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #7

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Sep 09, 2013 15:37 |  #8

I really like that last one. Good job.




  
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