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Great Blue Heron - Courtship and Nest Building

 
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Jan 27, 2006 18:44 |  #1

RADTEC1 asked me to post the first photo in "Critique Corner". The second is the next in sequence and together they tell a story.

Both were taken at sunrise. I was in the dark on the ground and the birds were in a tree in the early morning sun. 1DM2, 500/8.0, ISO 1600.

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Jan 27, 2006 18:48 |  #2

Wow, great shots!

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Jan 27, 2006 19:10 as a reply to  @ mrclark321's post |  #3

Very, very nice! Whose photos are these?


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Jan 27, 2006 19:10 |  #4

The shots ARE fantastic. It seems as though there is a different color cast on this post compared to the post in the Share section. Is that true.

Though I love the poses, the shot seems uncomfortabaly over sharpened. Did you use any post processing sharpening, if so, what? You might want to reprocess with a little less. Also, what lens (tele?) did you use and how much of a crop is it. Perhaps that's what I am seeing.

Anyway, great catch!


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Jan 27, 2006 20:15 |  #5

Fantastic shot!! The lines and curves are magnificent. This would make an lovely sillouette. I especially like the second one where they connect thus making their necks into a lovely series of curves. Well done to capture this image.


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Jan 27, 2006 20:18 |  #6

Love the improvement here in lighting and backgraound.. makes them 100% :)
https://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthre​ad.php?t=132822

Top notch work,.. can't find anything to critique.


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Jan 27, 2006 20:19 as a reply to  @ defordphoto's post |  #7

RFMSports wrote:
Very, very nice! Whose photos are these?

So I am gathering that RadTech convinced you that you should post these here. Thought maybe you were posting these for him...Seemed kinda odd.

I don't find these over-sharpened. These are some of the best Blue Heron shots I have seen. Good job!!


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Jan 27, 2006 21:27 |  #8

Thanks for the positive comments guys. I took these at Wakodahatchee Wetlands last weekend. I applied a little USM on the lightness layer in lab color. I cropped the shots to 8x10 keeping the height almost the same.

I am glad yall liked them. If nobody commented I could always blame it on RadTech.

I'm an old film guy just converted to digital a few years back and still learning camera raw and photoshop. (I sometimes think my photoshop program hates me)

Have two more Blue Heron shots I will post in Nature tomorrow then I'm done.

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Jan 28, 2006 01:02 |  #9

A rather brilliant one-two punch. The shots are wonderful on their own, but in tandem they're something special. In the first image, the primary heron's crest is splayed outward, along with the feathers along the base of it's neck. The secondary bird's neck-feathers are still somewhat limp and droop down. In the second shot, once the birds have made contact, the crest on the main bird has fallen, but the neck-feathers on the other bird have now risen to match the other. Dramatic nature captured well. Good work.


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Jan 28, 2006 03:45 |  #10

Very striking images and perfectly timed. There is a starkness to these that make them compelling to look at. I would never have guessed the conditions toy took them in. On my screen they look splendid. What you captured is so good that if I went nit picing I think I would be doing so just for the sake of it.
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Feb 10, 2006 12:20 |  #11

Exquisite!
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