Obviously please ignore the Photomatix watermarks, just playing around to see what I could do with it.
Thoughts on the overall image, editing, etc?
Sep 17, 2013 14:15 | #1 Obviously please ignore the Photomatix watermarks, just playing around to see what I could do with it. Bill R
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Sep 17, 2013 19:53 | #2 Photo is well balanced as far as tonal range is concerned (so good job done with photomatix). ---------------
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Sep 17, 2013 20:59 | #3 Sorry to be missing the clouds. I ordered big white puffies for that day but apparently I forget to cross a "t" on the purchase requisition. I also ordered two baby humpback whales to add drama but they cancelled last minute. Bill R
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wow,not sure if that reply was nessasary,u asked for critique and u got it,thats why u posted in this section u wanted critique,im no profesional and im very new here but i have to agree,its a ncice shot and the processing looks clear and bright but hes right its a snapshot. OLYMPUS EM1 M2. 12-100 F4 PRO.75mm f1.8,fisheye f1.8 pro. SONY A7 various manual lenses. FUJI X100
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Sep 17, 2013 21:10 | #5 So in all seriousness what makes it a snapshot? Bill R
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JeremyKPhoto Goldmember 1,634 posts Likes: 46 Joined Apr 2012 More info | Sep 17, 2013 21:13 | #6 The image seems a bit snap-snotty to me. Portrait orientation does not feel like it works very well for this. I would try the same snot again in landscape orientation and do it later in the day. Use a small aperture and try to get a little bit slower shutter speed. That will cause a different effect in the water. 5D Mark III / 70-200 2.8L IS II / 24-105L / 50 1.8 stm / Tamron 70-300 VC / Sigma 85mm 1.4 Art
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JeremyKPhoto Goldmember 1,634 posts Likes: 46 Joined Apr 2012 More info | Sep 17, 2013 21:14 | #7 Northwoods Bill wrote in post #16305314 So in all seriousness what makes it a snapshot? It is a snapshot because it looks a picture that could have been taken while walking past. A quick "oh look how pretty" then quick shot in auto mode. There is just not much creativity to make it much more than that. Not trying to be mean about this, just trying to offer ways to improve and make it better. 5D Mark III / 70-200 2.8L IS II / 24-105L / 50 1.8 stm / Tamron 70-300 VC / Sigma 85mm 1.4 Art
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Sep 17, 2013 21:29 | #8 as mentioned im no profesional but to me the first reply was acurate,had the shot been earlier the lighting may not have been so harsh or later in day or early eve and as mentioned some clouds in the sky would have looked great and maybe even caused a reflection on the water which in my mind looks great,also had there been a child fishing or something on the dock would have given the drama mentioned above,as mentioned its a nice shot but yes a snapshot, OLYMPUS EM1 M2. 12-100 F4 PRO.75mm f1.8,fisheye f1.8 pro. SONY A7 various manual lenses. FUJI X100
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The sparkle in the water was intentional. I will be the first to admit that I wish there had been some clouds but there simply wasn't. The image was taken in the early afternoon which I generally try to avoid but again I wanted the sparkle. Bill R
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Snydremark my very own Lightrules moment More info | Sep 17, 2013 22:25 | #10 Processing looks relatively good, although contrast seems a bit high; wouldn't know it had been run through Pmx if not for the watermarks. - Eric S.: My Birds/Wildlife
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onona Senior Member 511 posts Likes: 1 Joined Aug 2012 Location: Hertfordshire, UK More info | Sep 18, 2013 12:27 | #11 Tmz_99 wrote in post #16305136 Photo is well balanced as far as tonal range is concerned (so good job done with photomatix). The image itself lacks any drama, there are no clouds in the sky, appears the be shot around noon, composition a bit meh.... looks a bit like a snapshot really.. I am going to have to agree with this. From a technical perspective with regards to the exposure, there aren't really issues. But the composition itself is nothing special, and the time of day that the photo was taken is probably providing the least flattering kind of light you could get. You've also chosen a rather strange aspect ratio for your crop, which further creates unappealing tension with the elements in your image. Leigh
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picturepages Goldmember 1,267 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: Montana More info | Sep 18, 2013 18:31 | #12 Northwoods Bill wrote in post #16305277 Sorry to be missing the clouds. I ordered big white puffies for that day but apparently I forget to cross a "t" on the purchase requisition. I also ordered two baby humpback whales to add drama but they cancelled last minute. I thought this reply was funny....I think some took it another way. *~~I find.....the more I learn about photography, the more there is to learn about photography.
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Bianchi Cream of the Crop More info | Sep 18, 2013 18:41 | #13 My 3 cents.
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Sep 19, 2013 05:37 | #14 Unfortunately there was not room to move to the right. There was an ugly looking half fallen over grille to the right. I understand what everyone is saying about shooting during the golden hour but I like how the sun is playing off the water. I had also picked up on blue tinge in the trees (after posting) and I will watch for it in the final edit. Bill R
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Bianchi Cream of the Crop More info | Sep 20, 2013 12:56 | #15 I understand everything you said, but look at it from the picture window of the viewer, who has not been there... We do not get the fact that its a beautiful place to spend an afternoon, perhaps having lunch at.. I bet we would all agree, if we had been there, knowing the entire surroundings, but we havn't, and we are drawing our conclusion from the image presented. So your persepective is an individual one from being there, its not universal, and that's ok to.
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