Give me any advice you can think of! Trying to improve. Thank you!
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kalahmarie Senior Member  263 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jun 2009 Location: Denton, TX More info | Sep 22, 2013 11:20 | #1 Give me any advice you can think of! Trying to improve. Thank you! 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Kalah
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Sep 23, 2013 10:04 | #2 My advice...Keep doing them. I think they are all good and seems you have a talent for it. http://RyanLunaPhotography.com
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Sep 23, 2013 10:13 | #3 A few random thoughts based on what you have shown here. Almost all of these are a bit wide, a few examples of tighter shots would be nice, unless you dont do that. A few of these have a pretty obvious heavy vignette, (1 & 5, the top of #3) perhaps a bit lighter touch with that. On #7 you have her posed counter to the framing, she is looking into the short side of the frame with a lot of bright dead space behind her. Otherwise these are great shots, keep up the great work.
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Pirate4 Senior Member 693 posts Likes: 14 Joined Apr 2011 Location: Southern California More info | Sep 24, 2013 02:02 | #4 My only dislike is with #2 and the position of her hands and legs. Right knee could have been lower, I am not a "pro" but it just looks funny. Canon 7D
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PhilF Cream of the Crop  5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Sep 25, 2013 01:27 | #5 pay attention to details... stuff that you can fix while doing the session. http://philfernandezphotography.com
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Sep 30, 2013 09:08 | #6 PhilF wrote in post #16323459  pay attention to details... stuff that you can fix while doing the session. ...rouge hair in face, neck, forehead ...necklace .... posture. white balance too so you will have consistent skin tones. very true. Thank you! I know that paying attention to the hair and details of the model is something I have known I am not so good at! I pay attention to the pose and then forget the rest Kalah
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Sep 30, 2013 09:09 | #7 01Ryan10 wrote in post #16318379 My advice...Keep doing them. I think they are all good and seems you have a talent for it. Thank you! I plan on it Kalah
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Sep 30, 2013 09:09 | #8 gonzogolf wrote in post #16318397 A few random thoughts based on what you have shown here. Almost all of these are a bit wide, a few examples of tighter shots would be nice, unless you dont do that. A few of these have a pretty obvious heavy vignette, (1 & 5, the top of #3) perhaps a bit lighter touch with that. On #7 you have her posed counter to the framing, she is looking into the short side of the frame with a lot of bright dead space behind her. Otherwise these are great shots, keep up the great work. Good points. Thank you! Kalah
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