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Oct 01, 2013 21:48 |  #1

Starting to get my feet wet in the world of portrait/studio photography and here are a few shots from my 2nd time shooting people. All these were taken with natural light (late afternoon).

I present to you Nikki K.

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Oct 01, 2013 21:56 |  #2

Too much skin smoothing. I like the shots, but you've overprocessed them




  
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Oct 01, 2013 22:53 |  #3

I agree that they are overprocessed. As young as model is, this is not needed to this extent. Stunning girl and incredible hair. I would like to see a variety of expressions from her though. Beautiful bokeh, and maybe a bit of fill light is needed?


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Oct 01, 2013 22:57 |  #4

Skin looks plastic/fake and is that supposed to be a rainbow in the last one? Looks like it got cut off.


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Oct 01, 2013 23:12 |  #5

I'm with everyone else, your post processing is at about an 8 and you want to dial it back to about a 3, 3 and a half.


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Oct 02, 2013 09:12 |  #6

Nice lighting and pose


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Oct 02, 2013 10:57 as a reply to  @ TJays's post |  #7

She looks 10 years older in the second two.


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Oct 03, 2013 00:37 |  #8

Love the hair, #2 needs more lighton her face. did you add the rainbow in #3?


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