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neimad19 Senior Member 767 posts Likes: 5 Joined Mar 2012 More info Post edited over 6 years ago by neimad19. | Oct 07, 2013 21:10 | #1 Deleted
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MotorOn Senior Member 941 posts Likes: 52 Joined Feb 2007 More info | Oct 07, 2013 22:18 | #2 1,3,4,7 no eyes (3 they appear closed from blinking or heavily squinting) 1,7 no faces. Those are usually deal breakers for me with portraits, unless there is a major reason to break the rules for composition/art purposes. Website
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maverick75 Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 07, 2013 22:31 | #3 |
DanAnCan Senior Member 387 posts Joined Jul 2012 Location: Toronto, ON More info | Oct 07, 2013 22:34 | #4 I completely agree with Motor's Critique. Canon 5D3/5D2/8-15L/24-70LII/Σ35/85LII/135L/200L F2/Σ300 EX DG/EF TC 1.4 & 2X III/EX580 II/ PCB Busy Bee Kit
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Oct 07, 2013 22:42 | #5 1,3,4,7 no eyes (3 they appear closed from blinking or heavily squinting) 1,7 no faces. Those are usually deal breakers for me with portraits, unless there is a major reason to break the rules for composition/art purposes. With one have them open up to you just a little, pull her hair back, lower her hand to his shoulder and adjust his arm so it's not a right angle and you'll be able to highlight them, and their faces, and remove a bit of rigidity. 3 I can't tell if it's the lighting or the processing; but it looks like they're standing in front of a sears backdrop/Photoshoped into an image of the mountains. 5 as was mentioned by another when I saw this posted elsewhere (and I concur) the missing torso looks awkward. With 4 and 5 I cant help but wonder if a 3/4 angle on the face would go along way toward adding depth to the photo and connection with the subject. 6 feels too far away to draw me into any emotion, had your distance to subject been cut in half to reduce the power the sky has on the image, I think the pose and the back drop would have likely worked out real well. 7 I think this one would work if she was facing you either hair to her back behind her face or if you're trying to highlight it in front of her shoulder just have her tuck it under her chin so we can see the face and eyes. 2 is awesome, if you could hit this level of emotion and connection to the subject consistently you will be onto something, looks like there might be a little clipping, it works in this image, but be careful with others. The key it to get that shadow detail and not lose the highlights either. Something you may want to try out is making your subject the brightest and closest thing to the camera. It's not the tree stump or the shoulder or the tall grass or the hair on the side of the head that matters most but all these things are getting my eyes before the subject, instead of keeping it in the frame and redrawing attention back to the subject. 3,6,7 my mind is deciphering if I'm looking at a landscape with a person in it, or a portrait; and it should only take a few minor tweaks to make it so the killer location takes a backseat to your subject. You asked for honesty and you seem to be consistently putting out good exposures and a few slightly different looks; so these are intended to be constructive not demoralizing. As far as knowing when you're ready, you need to be consistent and have a plan in place to handle equipment failures and hurdles that come up that cause the plan to go to hell, after that, well I'm not sure i ever felt ready, just like it was time to go ahead and do it or I'd be perpetually finding excuses to push it back.
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Slaterza Goldmember 2,007 posts Likes: 7 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Beijing, China More info | Oct 07, 2013 22:42 | #6 I agree with Motor On and many of the technical aspects of these photos. Some have real potential but still need better processing and posing to take them to the next level. Sam Laterza flickr
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MikeyTown Member 152 posts Joined Mar 2011 Location: Corona, CA More info | Oct 08, 2013 17:41 | #7 neimad19 wrote in post #16354240 I really want to pursue photography as a part time paid venture, but I'm not entirely sure I'm ready to charge for my services. What point did you know you were ready to start charging for your work? You have received some fantastic advice so far... especially as it pertains to the technical side of these photos. I agree with all of it, but I wanted to comment specifically on the part of your post shown above. Michael Faraci
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Oct 08, 2013 20:54 | #8 I do like your use of the environment - you have a great eye. Keep working it. My favs are 1 and 6. Carry on! my little gallery
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Oct 08, 2013 21:46 | #9 I WOULD NEVER BUY THESE! I don't know these people Bodies: Canon 5D3 - Canon 1D4
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skwirnmn Goldmember 1,058 posts Likes: 1 Joined Aug 2011 More info | Oct 08, 2013 22:07 | #10 Yea, but there's plenty of room for improvement..
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Oct 08, 2013 22:13 | #11 ok I wouldn't say go ahead and charge $100 a pop for these lol...idk what photographers charge for photos, but keep your day job and do some shoots for friends...maybe ask around and see what a cheap photography session costs...don't make too many promises lol Bodies: Canon 5D3 - Canon 1D4
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USA!USA! Member 193 posts Joined May 2013 Location: Atlanta,GA More info | Oct 08, 2013 22:14 | #12 Only charge if it is not a hobby you enjoy or uses lots of your needed time IMO My camera is a part of my body only nicer...
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Oct 08, 2013 22:28 | #13 What would you ask someone to pay for how many images? If I wanted to sell some of my images, how do I even go about doing that? :P Just starting looking at it in the photography business section and there's not a ton of help but yeh ;P I'm not ready by any means, but maybe someone reading this is Bodies: Canon 5D3 - Canon 1D4
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USA!USA! Member 193 posts Joined May 2013 Location: Atlanta,GA More info | Oct 08, 2013 22:34 | #14 xarik wrote in post #16357070 What would you ask someone to pay for how many images? If I wanted to sell some of my images, how do I even go about doing that? :P Just starting looking at it in the photography business section and there's not a ton of help but yeh ;P I'm not ready by any means, but maybe someone reading this is Charge by time/session and a flat rate for editing then add in if they want CD or SD card etc. for self use My camera is a part of my body only nicer...
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Oct 08, 2013 22:41 | #15 When I started out (and I'm a hobbyist who makes a few dollars with my hubby in tow) I charged $50.00 for a session and they received 20-30ish images, or the best of the session. They knew I was learning, building experience, knew my work, and were willing victims. my little gallery
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