Avalanche3319 Member  112 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2013 Location: Montana More info | Oct 15, 2013 17:51 | #1 I'm not very good with creative or "artsy" shots, but I took this yesterday and thought it was kinda neat. Not quite sure if it works or not though. What do you guys think, does it do anything for you or would you scrap it? All opinions welcome, thanks!   Drizzle by Avalanche3319, on FlickrTotal rookie looking to learn, I welcome all C+C.
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JarvisCreativeStudios Goldmember  More info | Oct 15, 2013 17:55 | #2 I think it has potential, but I think it would be more appealing in B&W with a high contrast. WEBSITE
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JarvisCreativeStudios Goldmember More info | Oct 15, 2013 17:58 | #3 This is what I had envisioned.
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I'm thinking that if you get more of an angle on the wire and follow the fence line off into the distance, it might be more artsy? The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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Oct 15, 2013 18:01 | #5 Thanks, that does look pretty good. Do you think it takes away from the dreary, rainy day feel I was going for though? Total rookie looking to learn, I welcome all C+C.
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Oct 15, 2013 18:01 | #6 chauncey wrote in post #16373862 I'm thinking that if you get more of an angle on the wire and follow the fence line off into the distance, it might be more artsy?  Good idea, thank you! I'll keep that in mind for next time. Total rookie looking to learn, I welcome all C+C.
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JarvisCreativeStudios Goldmember More info | Oct 15, 2013 18:06 | #7 Avalanche3319 wrote in post #16373869 Thanks, that does look pretty good. Do you think it takes away from the dreary, rainy day feel I was going for though? This edit really retains the dreariness, and even enhances it.
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Oct 15, 2013 19:41 | #8 Jarvis Creative Studios wrote in post #16373884 This edit really retains the dreariness, and even enhances it. That looks pretty good, thanks! Did you just lower the saturation? Total rookie looking to learn, I welcome all C+C.
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JarvisCreativeStudios Goldmember More info | Oct 15, 2013 19:55 | #9 Avalanche3319 wrote in post #16374080 That looks pretty good, thanks! Did you just lower the saturation? I put a high pass filter on it, lowered the saturation, tweaked the brightness up a bit, and upped the contrast. WEBSITE
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Oct 15, 2013 20:52 | #10 Jarvis Creative Studios wrote in post #16374112 I put a high pass filter on it, lowered the saturation, tweaked the brightness up a bit, and upped the contrast. Good to know, thank you! The more I look at your version the more I like it. You can even kind of make out the little whisps of spiderweb below the barbed wire in your edit. Total rookie looking to learn, I welcome all C+C.
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JarvisCreativeStudios Goldmember More info | Oct 15, 2013 21:00 | #11 Avalanche3319 wrote in post #16374256 Good to know, thank you! The more I look at your version the more I like it. You can even kind of make out the little whisps of spiderweb below the barbed wire in your edit.
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Oct 15, 2013 21:49 | #12 There's any number of things you can do to an image if you started off with a quality file. In focus, exposure good (nothing blown out), interesting perspective and subject matter, etc. A few quick slider adjustments in LR5 is about it for this.  Image hosted by forum (665169) © ChunkyDA [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff.  Image hosted by forum (665173) © ChunkyDA [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Dave
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Thanks ChunkyDA, I really like the look of that as well. I don't have LR at the moment but hoping to get it soon. Total rookie looking to learn, I welcome all C+C.
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Oct 18, 2013 21:38 | #14 to be honest the composition is kinda killing me. i would crop the whole left side up to amlos making it a square images PHOTO-TIPS-ONLINE.com – photo tips, photography reviews
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navydoc Cream of the Crop  More info | I think black and white might go well with this image. You could also add some fog to the background and crop to place strong emphasis on just the barbed wire.  Image hosted by forum (665429) © navydoc [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. Gene - My Photo Gallery ||
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