=]^ The overall exposure looks a bit under on my monitor, and the faces in the back and sides look considerably under, IMO.
Gosh this is a tough crowd! Folks, quit giving Dave flack and obsessing about a shortcoming which is easily due to postprocessing, when the illumination in the photo is just fine!
=]The guy in the upper right looks almost two stops under the kid in the foreground
And Inverse Square falloff of light intensity due to distance is a normal characteristic; even large softboxes falloff according to Inverse Linear!
=]The problem you will have using a single box is falloff from the center to the edges. It will probably be almost a full stop brighter in the center than the edges of the photo if you back up wide enough to cover a group of that size.
The size of a softbox does NOT inherently limit its angle of coverage to the degree that folks seem to think!
Here is a shot just taken entirely by flash illumination (ambient light is underexposed by -9EV) using a 5" by 7" softbox, an area about 18 feet wide from distance of 16' with 20mm lens on APS-C.