Timothy and Leah Fall Session

Haven't had a serious session with my kids in a couple of years. Finally got out and here are a few keepers. Thanks for looking, comments welcome......

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Id warm 2 up a bit. The rest look great

I could be completely wrong, but they look stressed out and uptight- maybe because they felt compelled to pose a certain way. They look like they were (for lack of a better word, sorry) forced to smile. Are they regularly allowed to 'play' on railroad tracks? Perhaps this is best left for adult poses? Just a thought- maybe they felt uncomfortable being somewhere they instinctively know is wrong? Esp. #6 says to me- quick- run out there and sit on those tracks quickly while i get a picture. As an adult, I would even feel uncomfortable doing that. Maybe its a museum or something, but the viewer would not know that.

Also, it says fall session, but it looks more like summer with fall clothes on... green trees. #3 & #8 I find the fold in the sweater distracting.

#6 & #3- the post makes them look like strangers more than brother and sister. I would have liked to have seen #6 with them on the same side of the track.