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Here some new stuff.
It was my first time I did a shooting and the model was not my daughter or wife
Hope you like it!

Any criticism?

#1

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I think exposure might be too exposed but other than that great poses and great shot

I like them, but do you have any examples before the heavy processing?

Like the pose, needs to have the exposure or highlights lowered a bit.

Yes, maybe the contrast are a bit too much.
Here are the originals.

I like them all. #1 is a little too hot, and fix the exposure on #4.

rsieminski wrote in post #16426856
I like them all. #1 is a little too hot, and fix the exposure on #4.

#4?

The 1st image in the set of 2, only in the color version, which ends up, if you count down, #4. The 2nd one in the color version. Sorry for the confusion.

#1 original post needs a little tweeking but I really like it.

Thanks at all!

@rsieminski: what do you mean with: "#1 is a little too hot"

The 1st images in the op, is a little too bright, and the brightness, or exposure could be lowered a bit.

Ah ok, now I know what you mean
Yes, nearly every hobby- or professional-photographer says the same! But I like it!
I like the contrasts....but when I go on with the other pictures i took of her, i will regard it!

It just does not match the exposure of the 2nd one in the set. It stands well by itself, but they should be the same amt over exposed if they are in a set

These two pictures were my inspiration concerning the processing:

Picture 1

Picture 2

I''m not big on the direction of the light.