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pninnja
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Nov 05, 2013 21:48 |  #1

Hey there my name is Patrick, from Los Angeles.
Made my account on here just today, wish I came about this community a while ago!

I recently put up my site and would really love any feedback..
I'm still learning something new everyday, and trying trying to work on my portfolio as much as I can.

http://patrick.thefact​orymgmt.com/ (external link)

Thanks! :)


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Nov 06, 2013 00:27 |  #2

I like the design in general, maybe the pictures could be a bit bigger. Some of the images are loading slow for me. Also, the page isn't centred, it's aligned slightly to the left for me. I wouldn't mind the gallery to fill the whole browser. On the contact page, there are 3 squares in the bottom right, under your email.
Your photo's are very good, I like them a lot. Some really cool stuff in there, like the basket shot. However, in the portrait section, I don't like how you start out with 5 photo's of the same person.


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Nov 06, 2013 06:03 |  #3

Nice pictures, but web site is "clunky" if that makes sense. Don't like how you have to scroll to see more pictures.




  
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Nov 06, 2013 06:25 |  #4

I agree with your photos is nice but I don't like how your site have a million pictures of the same dude. If I was a client I wouldn't think you photograph anybody else.


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Nov 08, 2013 11:36 |  #5

Had a look at the website, didn't mind the scrolling. But for me the sports shots look squashed together. Not liking the 2nd football (soccer) shot, looks like he's checking out his arse! Love the first basketball shot but it's got lots of noise.
Have to agree about the Portrait section. Lots and lots shots of the same guy all in a row, not working for me.
Documentary section, why all in B/w? just a small nitpick.




  
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Nov 14, 2013 17:53 |  #6

jefzor wrote in post #16428297 (external link)
I like the design in general, maybe the pictures could be a bit bigger. Some of the images are loading slow for me. Also, the page isn't centred, it's aligned slightly to the left for me. I wouldn't mind the gallery to fill the whole browser. On the contact page, there are 3 squares in the bottom right, under your email.
Your photo's are very good, I like them a lot. Some really cool stuff in there, like the basket shot. However, in the portrait section, I don't like how you start out with 5 photo's of the same person.

tmoore323 wrote in post #16428659 (external link)
Nice pictures, but web site is "clunky" if that makes sense. Don't like how you have to scroll to see more pictures.

OneDeep wrote in post #16428689 (external link)
I agree with your photos is nice but I don't like how your site have a million pictures of the same dude. If I was a client I wouldn't think you photograph anybody else.

paul-t wrote in post #16434955 (external link)
Had a look at the website, didn't mind the scrolling. But for me the sports shots look squashed together. Not liking the 2nd football (soccer) shot, looks like he's checking out his arse! Love the first basketball shot but it's got lots of noise.
Have to agree about the Portrait section. Lots and lots shots of the same guy all in a row, not working for me.
Documentary section, why all in B/w? just a small nitpick.


Thank you guys for the feedback, I really appreciate it!


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