Caught this picture awhile back and loved the content but wondering what I should have done differently to better. Thanks
EOS Rebel XSI w/ Tamron 70-300 F3.5/5.6 (Cheap lens)
ISO400 - F10 - 1/2000 @ 70mm
Krottski Member 126 posts Joined Oct 2013 Location: Michigan More info | Nov 12, 2013 07:50 | #1 Caught this picture awhile back and loved the content but wondering what I should have done differently to better. Thanks EOS Rebel XSI w/ Tamron 70-300 F3.5/5.6 (Cheap lens) ISO400 - F10 - 1/2000 @ 70mm Canon 60d - Canon 70-200 2.8 IS II - Tamron 17-50 F2.8 VC - Thrifty 50
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joedlh Cream of the Crop 5,513 posts Gallery: 52 photos Likes: 684 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea. More info | Nov 12, 2013 08:38 | #2 Nice. Wall-worthy. The one thing I would do is clone out the bit of contrail in the sky on the left. Joe
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paul-t Goldmember 1,871 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: The deep south, that's the deep south of England. More info | Nov 12, 2013 12:03 | #3 I would crop the top off the tree's, make it a pano style shot.
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GlynT Member 71 posts Joined Nov 2012 More info | Nov 12, 2013 15:32 | #4 That's very striking. I think I'd maybe have a shot at putting a tiny bit more colour in the sky so it has a slight stronger hint of blue... GT-Images.net
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Nov 13, 2013 01:42 | #5 Very nice shot. Great colors and light. I really like the way the light is playing on the fog/mist. Very nicely captured. Composition is good too, except... I would crop from the bottom up and put the horizon/lower tree one at the bottom 3rd point. That pulls the horizon off the center and removes what I would consider unnecessary space. Dave
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Thanks for all the help. Here are some edits based on your suggestions. I would be interested in your opinions of what worked, what didn't. Or any other suggestions. I framed the picture for my parents and it looks good on the wall, but I keep thinking there was more I could have done with it. Cropped Option 2: (Or this one Titus 213) Panoramic Crop (Paul-t....Wishing I would have framed it this way, I think?) Finally, my attempt at adding some color to the sky (GlynT) Canon 60d - Canon 70-200 2.8 IS II - Tamron 17-50 F2.8 VC - Thrifty 50
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kingsman64 Member 125 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2013 Location: Middle England Northamptonshire More info | The acid test I would happily hang that on my wall Best regards
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Nov 13, 2013 08:58 | #8 That is a fantastic photo! T3i |70D |70-200L| 400L | 100-400L | 24-105L | 50 1.8 | sig 10-20 | sig 150-500
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Jay06GTO Member 56 posts Likes: 1 Joined Mar 2010 More info | Nov 13, 2013 09:08 | #9 Great capture! _______________
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schlagle Senior Member 571 posts Likes: 12 Joined Feb 2012 Location: San Francisco Bay Area More info | Nov 13, 2013 09:32 | #10 I like the panoramic crop the best (and a lot actually!). That's what I would have suggested you do to it so I'm a bit biased. 5D Mark III | EF 50 ƒ/1.4, EF 24-105L ƒ/4, EF 70-200L ƒ/2.8 IS II, EF 16-35L ƒ/2.8 II, MP-E65, EF 100L ƒ/2.8 IS Macro | 600EX-RT, 320EX, MT-24EX
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Nov 13, 2013 10:10 | #11 That's exactly what I meant. And I still like that crop Dave
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bartc Goldmember More info | love the pano style me personally would have like to see the sun a bit more to the left or right of the frame -Bart
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PhotosGuy Cream of the Crop, R.I.P. More info | Nov 15, 2013 10:57 | #13 bartc wrote in post #16450283 love the pano style me personally would have like to see the sun a bit more to the left or right of the frame The pano for me, too. I thought about moving the sun, but as a peaceful (static) image, I think dead center is the place for it. FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
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Nov 15, 2013 13:06 | #14 What a lovely photo ! Image hosted by forum (668236) © Amamba [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. (I think it got posterized somewhere along the way, probably on trying to compress JPG to stay under 150kb. But with an original full size JPG or RAW, you should be able to do anything). Ex-Canon shooter. Now Sony Nex.
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