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Nov 18, 2013 08:14 |  #1

A fair amount of PP on this capture.

There was a certain look I was going for and for the most part I got there. I have more work that I want to do is PS6 but just ran out of time over the weekend.

Future items:
- Possibly clone out some of the more modern items in the picture (hand cart)
- More work on hanging light glow
- Revise light rays through window (slightly different angle)
- Additional highlights painted in on train itself

I am interested in what you like and don't like and always for more suggestions, ideas to continue improving my work. I included a black and white version as well.

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Nov 18, 2013 08:51 |  #2

Except for the cart, they look pretty good to me.


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Nov 18, 2013 10:16 as a reply to  @ PhotosGuy's post |  #3

I like the edit but do agree that the light rays should be changed to angle down more. I'd have it angled to the highlights on the floor.

I would also select the close sides of the lamp shades you wanted to 'turn on, copy them to a new layer' and put the lights behind them higher up and on a different layer too. As it is now, the lights are too low and don't look right.

Here's a quick edit on the two closest lights as an example.

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Nov 18, 2013 15:36 as a reply to  @ navydoc's post |  #4

Thanks for the feedback. I am hoping to get some more time tonight to continue my work in PS6. I am finding that cloning the hand cart out is quite challenging with all the other stuff going on around it. Looking forward to the finished product. Will post some progress maybe tomorrow or Tuesday.

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