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Nov 21, 2013 15:09 |  #1

Had a lil E-Session yesterday afternoon. personally think they came out well! What ya think?!

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Nov 21, 2013 16:19 |  #2

I am not much into "romantic" photography (like engagements and weddings) but I think they are nice, well exposed and create a good "feel".
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In #1 (may be a spontanuous kiss...) but I would have liked to see slightly more of the faces.
In #2 there is a bit too much empty space at the top.


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Nov 21, 2013 16:26 as a reply to  @ vk2gwk's post |  #3

thanks!. Yea i can see that with the dead space, i was tryin to hold the crop to where it captures most of the cloud structure, but it sorta dies off up there.


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Nov 21, 2013 18:17 |  #4

poses seem nice, composition is off a bit IMO - you don't have "image editing OK" on so I can't show you what I would crop too...




  
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Nov 22, 2013 05:11 |  #5

tmoore323 wrote in post #16470426 (external link)
poses seem nice, composition is off a bit IMO - you don't have "image editing OK" on so I can't show you what I would crop too...

Thanks. Just discovered that was an on/off option. It's turned on now. Crop away!


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Nov 22, 2013 08:05 |  #6

Nice, but I just think the greenery in the foreground on #1 is a bit distracting. Needs a crop, too.


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Nov 22, 2013 08:30 |  #7

Agree with a crop - I'd especially crop out what looks like a large tombstone in the left background.


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Nov 22, 2013 08:55 |  #8

Qbx wrote in post #16471639 (external link)
Agree with a crop - I'd especially crop out what looks like a large tombstone in the left background.

ive developed problems with cropping too tight, so i am trying to open things up. i cropped up the foreground in #2, but not quite seeing the tombstone you are referring to. would that be the brick column in #1?


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