Girlfriend portrait in black and white

Here is a picture I took of my girlfriend using 6D + 85 1.8. It was shot in a hotel bathroom in Singapore, and the mirror had two row of leds which provided a nice lighting.

Converted in LR4.

That's a decent candid portrait--maybe a little too much headroom ? I'd probably move the eyes to the 'third' position when cropping down from the top.

Christopher Steven b wrote in post #16484630
That's a decent candid portrait--maybe a little too much headroom ? I'd probably move the eyes to the 'third' position when cropping down from the top.

Agreed

Thank you both for your feedback! When I get back home tonight I'll try to crop it as you suggest and I'll post the result here

hi there,

how did you enjoy Singapore? i do notice there her right eye is in focus where the left eye is not.

cheers!

I did not have time to re-post the crop yersterday night SO I will be doing it during the week end.

renaissance_myth wrote in post #16486595
hi there,

how did you enjoy Singapore? i do notice there her right eye is in focus where the left eye is not.

cheers!

I loved Singapore! quite a mix of modernity and tradition. Indeed only her right right is in focus the DOF is quite small at 1.8. I think that her left eye being much darker also makes it seem less sharp