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Nov 30, 2013 11:08 |  #1

I don't have access to the glamour section yet, so I will post here. Would love to hear feed back. Been awhile since I have posted.

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Nov 30, 2013 12:11 |  #2

i like them great lightning only nitpick that sticks out to me is it seems that in #1 here face seems to bright or over processed.. other then that im liking them


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Nov 30, 2013 12:13 |  #3

If you have images to post in that section you can request access.

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Nov 30, 2013 13:59 |  #4

face on #1 looks out of focus. I really like the crop of #2



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Nov 30, 2013 16:14 |  #5

1 looks a little OOF. I like the feathering of the light though. The skin showing between the jeans and shirt bugs me. Only those 2 complaints though. Really like her pose and outfit.

Like 2, no complaints ;)


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Nov 30, 2013 16:55 |  #6

Nice job! I really like the pose and lighting in #2.


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Nov 30, 2013 18:22 |  #7

In glamor shots of women we usually stress curves, so when doing shots like #1 it's a good idea to bring along some clothes-pins to pin strategically on blouses such that you can eliminate puffy looking areas around the waist that detract from a curvacious body.
Otherwise very nicely done of a lovely model.


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Dec 01, 2013 06:47 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #8

First one looks like the focus point is her hip just at the top of her jeans. It's a shame her face is so OOF here. Could have been a good shot.

Second one, maybe it's just her position but her belly looks like it's sort of poofed out just below her arm. Great face though.


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