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Dec 02, 2013 15:04 |  #1

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I wish I could keep the flowers on the sides from being cropped but this didn't quite work out.

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Dec 02, 2013 15:51 |  #2

You might want to shoot using a little fresher flowers. These look like they're sort of on their way round the bend.


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Dec 03, 2013 11:04 |  #3

Well, I agree with saea501 about the flowers being more fresh. I also don't like how it looks like a flash is lighting the flowers, I would try to use some kind of off camera lighting. The colors are off too, I think due to the lighting more than anything else. I also would have composed this differently, either moving further away from the flowers to get more of them in the frame or I would have moved in closer and focused on one of the flowers from a little different angle. All just my opinion though.


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