first thing for me was the bow and how his beard blends in with the white on the suit
shanehawley Member 89 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2013 More info | Dec 09, 2013 08:59 | #31 first thing for me was the bow and how his beard blends in with the white on the suit
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Dec 10, 2013 17:48 | #32 The bow in her hair draws my attention and keeps it. Website: Iowa Landscape Photography
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Dec 10, 2013 18:41 | #33 Other people already replied but the bow is the #1 attention grabber in that photo. Aside from that, the window is also distracting. Those are the main competing elements. Laurence
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suecassidy Goldmember 4,102 posts Likes: 37 Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach California More info | Dec 10, 2013 19:13 | #34 for me it was the window i noticed first. Sue Cassidy
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Advanced_AP2 Junior Member 28 posts Joined Aug 2012 More info | Dec 10, 2013 20:27 | #35 Window first, teeth second.
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DTZee Senior Member 322 posts Joined Aug 2008 More info | Dec 10, 2013 20:40 | #36 The window. Canon EOS 7D -- Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L II -- Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 -- Sigma 35 f/1.4 ART -- Canon 24-105 f/4L -- Canon Speedlite 430EX -- Canon Speedlite 600EX-RT -- BG-E7 Grip
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agl99 Member 156 posts Likes: 1 Joined Apr 2013 More info | The square crop doesn't work for me...I would eliminate the left side and there is something dark on the girls lip bottom right. I don't agree with many of the other comments about changing the people's appearance... they are who they are, you should not airbrush them to perfection, just fix up temporary flaws...like pimples, cut, scrape... hair that's out of place... I think its wrong to start adding teeth or stuff like that, unless...it's for a commercial.
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cerett Senior Member 824 posts Likes: 240 Joined Jun 2013 Location: Santa Ana, California More info | Dec 20, 2013 18:00 | #39 genesimmons wrote in post #16508924 oh and i think the photo is very nice,the santa looks a little out of focus to me but still a nice memory I agree. This is great for a family photo album, a memory. If that is what you wanted, it's perfect. https://www.martinfeldmanphotography.com
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Precarious Mostly Lurking 12 posts Joined Dec 2013 Location: PA, USA More info | Dec 25, 2013 14:06 | #40 For me it's the window. Odd to see Santa without a hat but it's the window that pulls me away from the subjects. Everything else - the bow, missing teeth, etc. - is subjective.
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Dec 26, 2013 16:27 | #41 This is fun. The window is the most distracting!
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cpam.pix Goldmember 1,275 posts Likes: 10 Joined Apr 2011 More info | Dec 27, 2013 01:10 | #42 The white vertical window frame that lines up with Santa's beard. For me it drew a line down the middle of the picture and drew me to that white line. Bow? What bow? The crops or post-processing that take the window frame out are what make the shot a keeper. 1D-III with stuff to stick on it:
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Dec 27, 2013 16:04 | #43 cpam.pix wrote in post #16556545 The white vertical window frame that lines up with Santa's beard. For me it drew a line down the middle of the picture and drew me to that white line. Bow? What bow? The crops or post-processing that take the window frame out are what make the shot a keeper. [Is she from Texas? If so, that bow is about 3 sizes under standard issue for the girls there.] Thanks for sharing. "Is she from Texas? If so, that bow is about 3 sizes under standard issue for the girls there."
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dcsmith40D Senior Member 543 posts Joined Mar 2008 Location: Atlanta More info | Dec 30, 2013 19:59 | #44 I'm not sure there is a wrong answer here. If I would have looked at the picture with out the question "what is the distraction," I'm not sure I would have studied it long enough to figure out what I didn't like about it. Canon 40D; 50 f1.8, 70-200 f2.8 IS L, 580 EX II, 1.4 TC, 24-70 f2.8 L, (2) 430 EX II
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