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(Action shots) Family rafting sequence

 
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Dec 07, 2013 10:33 |  #1

Hey guys, me again :)

While on a whitewater kayaking/motorcycling trip in the Great Smokies I took the opportunity to try my hand at some action photography (not one of my strengths). I often find my self discouraged and not wanting to take my camera out to events because I am not a very good photographer when it comes to on-the-go shooting (I think that makes me a bad photographer, period. :lol:). I usually miss focus, or don't get everything I want in focus, or my exposure is off, usually all of the above.

BUT, I was particularly proud of myself for these shots and I want to get some CC on them and some advice on shooting moving objects maybe? I don't think I have my servo focus set up properly because it always seems like such a chore to shoot this stuff!

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Dec 07, 2013 16:39 |  #2

Focus tracking looks quite good - great expressions on their faces gets the moment communicated quite well. Good job!


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Dec 07, 2013 17:59 |  #3

Looks like you nailed the focus to me ;)


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Dec 07, 2013 20:06 |  #4

In shot #3, I thought the young lady in blue on the left was going to go for a swim. Love the shots. I would print them and put them in a multi image frame.


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Dec 07, 2013 23:22 |  #5

Nice work on these!


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Dec 08, 2013 00:26 |  #6

Great work on these. Just enough DOF and great expressions.


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Dec 08, 2013 03:06 |  #7

These look great!


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Dec 09, 2013 00:53 |  #8

The focus appears spot on. The expressions you captured are priceless. The action is superb.

The first thing I noticed, though, is that the colors pop!

Awesome. Print.

Thanks for sharing....and setting the bar very high for the rest of us.


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Dec 09, 2013 06:46 |  #9

Great shots




  
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Dec 09, 2013 16:37 |  #10

Wow! Thanks for all the awesome compliments and feedback! As sick as it sounds, I was hoping for more criticism =P


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Dec 09, 2013 16:47 |  #11

Loxley wrote in post #16514449 (external link)
Wow! Thanks for all the awesome compliments and feedback! As sick as it sounds, I was hoping for more criticism =P

These absolutely suck! :-P Okay, I don't mean that in the slightest. I wish you had been the photographer when my husband and I went white water rafting. You're shots are WAY better than the one's that I had to buy.


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Dec 10, 2013 02:30 |  #12

Loxley wrote in post #16514449 (external link)
Wow! Thanks for all the awesome compliments and feedback! As sick as it sounds, I was hoping for more criticism =P

Ok maybe a bit more room on some of the photos to change up the compositions a bit? Slight more room in the direction the raft is moving in will give more of an impression of movement perhaps. IMO of course.


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