Here is another old photo I dug up of a Vermilion Flycatcher, which I thought I could make a little better. Feel free to Critique same as before.
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Birdwatcher86 Member 147 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Texas...God's Country More info | Dec 16, 2013 15:51 | #1 Here is another old photo I dug up of a Vermilion Flycatcher, which I thought I could make a little better. Feel free to Critique same as before. Before: IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com …/58782637@N07/11409166564 Michael
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2n10 Cream of the Crop More info | Dec 16, 2013 17:46 | #2 Looks good, much tougher braches to remove. The red looks blown in the after.
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OhLook insufferably pedantic. I can live with that. 24,909 posts Gallery: 105 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 16339 Joined Dec 2012 Location: California: SF Bay Area More info | Dec 16, 2013 18:37 | #3 What I learned about the difficulty with red. To get detail in red areas, you have to underexpose a little and bring up the exposure in PP. PRONOUN ADVISORY: OhLook is a she. | Comments welcome
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lhoy Senior Member More info | Dec 16, 2013 20:52 | #4 Way oversharpened, red is way too blown out and the edges of perches are obvious where you cleaned. I like the before much better.
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Dec 16, 2013 21:15 | #5 I agree with y'all's thoughts on the red, I think I overdid it on the saturation. I noticed the the top part of the branch I forgot to touch up as well. I'll make the corrections. As far as the branches I think it just looks odd in some areas because the background was blurred anyway so there was never much definition. Thanks for the critiquing! Michael
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lhoy Senior Member More info | Dec 17, 2013 09:02 | #6 Mike, try cropping to a vertical shot as well. I think that might enhance the shot with the way you have the branch going vertical.
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