School Formal

My son and his girlfriend about to go out to the school formal. I hope he looks like this when he gets back!!!

any C&C?

It's a nice shot I'm sure they'll like. My main nitpik is that the catch lights don't show well or at all. Your flash might have been to far to the side so they only show in one eye. That makes the other eye look dead. I also think she needed a hair light or reflector to separate her from the background. The reflector also would have helped with the dark shadow along his nose which is distracting.

She looks like she is pulling away from him. I think a slight tilt or her head towards him would make appear to be more together. Key light is a touch to high for her head tilt (see the shadow from her brow her left eye).

Cheers, I'll take all those points on board for next time.

My comment: she looks 5 years older than he does.

...............Here don't, I worry constantly