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Jan 05, 2014 14:28 |  #1

What do you guys think?

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Jan 05, 2014 14:36 |  #2

To my eye it has an overall cool cast, and not just because of all that blue. Pretty model, attractive pose. Clever way to add in your trademark.


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Jan 05, 2014 15:09 |  #3

I like this. Interesting pose, nicely lit, cool background. I'd agree that the skin tones look a bit cool. Would love to see a bit of a stronger catch-light in her eyes just to bring them to life a bit... I'd perhaps consider lightening the area around the bottom right corner a bit... would be nice to see the curve of her bum/lower back and some detail on a shoes a little bit more.


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Jan 05, 2014 15:20 |  #4

Thanks for the comments guys.. I didn't notice it was cool untill I warmed it up and did a comparison!! Like an Idiot I forgot my 18% Grey card for WB...

A re - edit here, As for lighting her backside... I wanted them in shadow. I lifted the shadows out, but it didn't seem to have the same impact for me personally...

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Jan 06, 2014 20:26 |  #5

I may be wrong. It seems that cutting the background just a bit from the left side will bring face out of blue dominance. Something like this.

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Jan 06, 2014 20:31 |  #6

You don't even need a 18% gray card, the spots on her top would have been more than enough.

really like it!


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