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Jan 07, 2014 05:28 |  #1

Ok.. I'm not sure if i'm breaking moral boundaries with this edit...

Can you just have a look and let me know what you think?? cheers guys...

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Jan 07, 2014 05:50 |  #2

I prefer the first one Trevor


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Jan 07, 2014 06:58 |  #3

I prefer #1 but both are acceptable based on what you are trying to produce.


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Jan 07, 2014 07:17 |  #4

I like what you've done to her skin highlights and shadows in the second, it less of a flash look, not the the original was over the top in that reagard.


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Jan 07, 2014 10:01 |  #5

wait...did you thin out her face? Puppet Warp?


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Jan 07, 2014 11:45 |  #6

01Ryan10 wrote in post #16585233 (external link)
wait...did you thin out her face? Puppet Warp?

yes, using liquify


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Jan 07, 2014 12:38 |  #7

You did a great job on thinning her face. I like #2


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Jan 07, 2014 16:06 |  #8

The jawline on #2 looks too 'sharp', not natural to my eyes. Almost looks like she's wearing a mask. I like what you did to the rest of the image though.


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Jan 07, 2014 20:39 |  #9

Her chin on the "after" looks very unnatural.




  
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Jan 07, 2014 20:43 as a reply to  @ KirkS518's post |  #10

I like #1, face look more natural. Everything else is great but her legs are kinda throwing me off. One thinner than the other. I know it's because of her pose. Great shot otherwise.

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Jan 07, 2014 20:45 |  #11

#1 like how it stands out with the DOF.


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Jan 07, 2014 21:14 |  #12

#2 i great... the chin is good, post processing good, colour tone, I'd maybe take it down a notch, but if the series is all shot in this tone, then all good.. :)


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Jan 07, 2014 23:34 |  #13

since you started liquefying her face...you should also liquefy her figure so it would match her slimmer face.


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Jan 08, 2014 06:04 as a reply to  @ PhilF's post |  #14

I think # 2 looks completely unnatural and does a disservice to her. I realize it's the hot fad but I don't care for the hazy processing quality.


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Jan 08, 2014 09:32 |  #15

I prefer the colors/tones of #1.

Those saying #2 doesn't look natural, they're right when you compare the two. If they never saw #1 they'd have no point of reference and would have never mentioned it.


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