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Jan 12, 2014 13:11 |  #1

Hi guys
my name is ben landa and am sharing my photography work recently done in utah valley

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Jan 12, 2014 21:56 |  #2

Here are my comments:

Image#1: 1/2 hut on left is very distracting. too much dirt in foreground. Overall composition is lacking a subject IMO. There is potential, but may require some cropping.

Image#2: Composition has potential, but as it currently is presented does not make any sense. What were you wanting the viewer to 'see?'


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