Heather

A recent shot my daughter.

She's lovely, but there's something about the pose that doesn't work for me. I can't quite put my finger on it. I think it could be the jaw-line on the camera right side. Also, for some reason, the camera right earring is distracting to me.

Thank you. The ear rings are very shiny, but she wanted to wear them.

It's funny but after watching this video and others that I started noticing when people know that your about to snap that shot they stiffen up and draw the head back. Check out this. Hope it helps. You have a beautiful model there!

http://www.youtube.com …oJnFtA_k&featur​e=youtu.be

Thanks Carl. That was eye opening. The model says thank you too,

A bit more catch-light would draw me into her eyes versus looking around at other areas (ex. hair flyaways that could be cleaned up some).

Gart wrote in post #16600335
A bit more catch-light would draw me into her eyes versus looking around at other areas (ex. hair flyaways that could be cleaned up some).

I do wish I'd gotten more light in her eyes. I did cleanup the flyawys after I posted this. Thanks for commenting.

Very nice image.

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Thank you, Thomas.