first ever attempt at taking pix of humans haha

let me know how i did. i think i did ok didn't have much to work with as far as scenery.

fyi it was a million times harder then inanimate objects

sorry about the amount of pix i have more i just grabbed a few

enjoy

1.my photo shop attempts

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any input would be very helpful

I already gave you some on accessphoto. :P

Howdy.

I generally believe that the subject especially when shooting a person should be more important than the photoshoping, the angles, background and harsh lighting do nothing for her. The third is the most flattering, I would have her turn her face more towards you and angle yourself to have her more centered... she is a very pretty girl the last shot is great of her face, very natural and pretty. Just my two cents and i'm pretty new to this as well.
Sari.

#1 needs more light on the model and less on the background.
#2 has a very interesting contrast between the colors in the model and the essentially monochrome background.
#3 is a nice pose but she is cut off below by the framing, so that does not improve the composition.

#4 Perhaps the best shot from every aspect save one. You really should not use a normal lens this close up, as the distortion shows up very strong (large noses).