The Hat

Hi all..

One of today's portfolio photo session.

Any C&C is much appreciated.

Thanks

Very cute.

Good exposure and pose position of arms etc.

With the foot out from her body, it looks a little enlarged. Imho either tuck the lag in closer (turn more to camera left) or shoot from a higher angle.
Edit: or longer lens.

Also i am a little uncomfortable with the amount of leg showing on a girl of this age.

Micro5797 wrote in post #16674612
Also i am a little uncomfortable with the amount of leg showing on a girl of this age.

Ditto. It comes across as overly sexual imo. Otherwise very cute.

Micro5797 wrote in post #16674612
Very cute.

Good exposure and pose position of arms etc.

With the foot out from her body, it looks a little enlarged. Imho either tuck the lag in closer (turn more to camera left) or shoot from a higher angle.
Edit: or longer lens.

Also i am a little uncomfortable with the amount of leg showing on a girl of this age.

nes_matt wrote in post #16674663
Ditto. It comes across as overly sexual imo. Otherwise very cute.

Thank you for your input guys.. I agree that there is distortion but honestly her feet
are a bit over size also. Next time will try to the keep the foot in such a pose more to the middle.

Regarding the leg, I agree and when choosing the photos with her mom I told her that this might be showing alot, but she said that she love the photo and still wants it in her daughter portfolio.. So i kept it..

Thanks again

technically its a nice image..

however i think the pose, makeup and outfit is somewhat inappropriate...

Love it, is all the CC I can give.

I don't think it is inappropriate. If the mom loved it, then don't worry about it, that is what matters.

Regarding the perspective distortion, what focal length were you using? If you were able to get the same framing with a longer lens that might help too. Although, I do think being at a slightly higher angle would have been better regardless.

Aside from that, the framing on the left side is too tight, it is almost clipping her elbow.

Rushmore wrote in post #16680560
technically its a nice image..

however i think the pose, makeup and outfit is somewhat inappropriate...

I agree to some might some might think so.. but I am in peace as the mom approved it.

TJays wrote in post #16680714
Love it, is all the CC I can give.

Thank you

SoCalTiger wrote in post #16681644
I don't think it is inappropriate. If the mom loved it, then don't worry about it, that is what matters.

Regarding the perspective distortion, what focal length were you using? If you were able to get the same framing with a longer lens that might help too. Although, I do think being at a slightly higher angle would have been better regardless.

Aside from that, the framing on the left side is too tight, it is almost clipping her elbow.

I was using the 24-70mkii@67mm. Also I have applied the lens correction profile in post.. I should have tried the higher prespective, I will make sure to do so next time

Thank you for the elbow note. I will fix that now in post.

Thank you for your input..