EXPERIMENTAL

This is probably my fourth image created with layers....it takes me forever but im getting the hang of it. Both are photos I shot and one is of myself...scary huh? well i'd appreciate all feedback, positive and critical. If you have any advice while working in layers that would be helpful too! Enjoy:p

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Wild concept. Great Anti-Smoking add.

That's one heck of a composition! Something about it bothers me- I don't like looking at it (that's not to say it's not good). I think you've sent a message here that is not necessarily clear, but it's certainly loud. Good post processing work.

It's neat. For me personally the mouth is almost hyper dominant and I can't take in any other part of the image but the mouth.

thanks for the comments. I thought it would make a good anti-smoking add as well...this probly took me an hour and a half to do including shooting the picture of my self, that was difficult to get it sharp and achieve the effect I wanted. overall I am pleased and a little weirded out that i can look like that! lol

I like this one, hard to believe that it is your beautiful smile!

Lol thanks Ruth...anyone else like this? find it intriguing? comments on pp or whatever? thanks in advance.

looks like youve been flossing!!

yeah i try to keep them pearly white and nice and clean. LOL. any suggestions on improvement?

actually no, its art and it's subjective.. everyone will interpert in differnt and that is cool.

If this were supposed to be a anti smoking campaign, then I dun think that it's very well done. You need black and dirty teeth. haha. Unless your theme is "smoking cleans your teeth". But i really like the smooth and the overall softfocus of the image.

I've heard malocclusion causes pretty bad headaches. anyway, nice composite!