Lisa

more and more and more

# 2 would be pretty killer with just a little skin work.

Even it out a bit at her cheek and just above her jawline.

Nice picture.

Ya, #2 is nice.

Another vote for #2, and I like it just as it is... natural. She's a beauty, can't wait to see more.

Thanky guys, for your response

No 2 for me also.
It's easy to suggest a change after the shutter has fired, but perhaps a slight movement of her face towards camera may allow some white in both sides of the nearest eye if she retained the stare at the same focal point. I do love the thin thread of light to indicate the neckline - Very clever.
Like the natural skin too

Thanks reheat module