Point-n-shoot-n Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Mar 09, 2014 21:55 | #1 Been wanting to get this young lady back in the studio for a long time now.....finally got the chance and the shot I have been looking for. I am happy with the result but would love to hear your opinions on it, good or bad. I am always looking to improve and welcome all criticism! I already know about the double catchlights but what else can you find that needs improving? Thanks for looking!  Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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short_wave Senior Member  674 posts Likes: 54 Joined Jan 2011 Location: DFW More info | Mar 10, 2014 00:27 | #2 Cute girl! Feedback
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Point-n-shoot-n THREAD STARTER Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Mar 10, 2014 17:12 | #3 Thanks for the input! I ran this through portrait professional and might have been better to just spend the time and do it manually in photoshop. I have the raw file so anything that has been done up till now can all be started again. I too saw the strands of hair over the eye after I started processing and wish I had seen them before I shot. I will have another go at it and repost to see if I can improve over my initial processing. Thanks again! Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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TJays Goldmember  1,400 posts Likes: 289 Joined Mar 2013 Location: Los Angeles USA More info | Mar 10, 2014 17:49 | #4 Great shot, just needs a very few minor processing changes, maybe bring up the sharpening just a bit. But still a nice capture overall. Regards
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Point-n-shoot-n THREAD STARTER Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Mar 10, 2014 18:12 | #5 Here is an edit I just attempted. I toned down the skin smoothing quite a bit and cloned out the stray hairs over the eyes. I also brought up the lip saturation a bit and tried to even out the skin tones to a more natural hue. Does this look better??  Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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Point-n-shoot-n THREAD STARTER Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Mar 10, 2014 20:51 | #6 Thought I would try it in B/W.....thoughts?  Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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TJays Goldmember 1,400 posts Likes: 289 Joined Mar 2013 Location: Los Angeles USA More info | Mar 10, 2014 20:57 | #7 B&W is a knockout, suits that capture and crop, very nice. Regards
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Point-n-shoot-n THREAD STARTER Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Mar 10, 2014 21:15 | #8 Thank you TJays...I liked that one the best as soon as I tried it! Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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