Would like some general CC on this shot regarding composition and anything else I could improve on.
Thanks!
neimad19 Senior Member 767 posts Likes: 5 Joined Mar 2012 More info | Mar 30, 2014 02:13 | #1 Would like some general CC on this shot regarding composition and anything else I could improve on.
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Mar 30, 2014 07:36 | #2 crop the top, adds nothing, remember the rule of thirds Light L16: http://lightRumors.co
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Boone13 Senior Member 387 posts Likes: 13 Joined Dec 2013 Location: Columbus, OH More info | Mar 30, 2014 07:48 | #3 I respectfully disagree with planet5D, I think the trees at the top provide a frame for the path and illustrates the vastness/thickness of the forest. IMO, your comp works. I would add a bit more contrast and call it a shot. Some moments are too amazing to be ruined with words.
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Spike44 Goldmember 2,155 posts Likes: 3 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Mar 30, 2014 08:59 | #4 I agree with Boone13 but I would have framed the scene so that the dark tree on the right is a bit further from the edge of the frame (the left is fine). I wouldn't want to lose anything from this nice nature shot.
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Mar 30, 2014 17:55 | #7 Ok, obviously getting out voted here, but tell me that the extra foliage really adds something to the image. In this crop, I feel the eye moving thru the image from bottom around the path to the top in the OP image, my eye doesn't really move, it sees the fog in the center and stays there. I don't see anything of value lost and I find an awesome image with movement. Light L16: http://lightRumors.co
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I think a polarizer would have helped by cutting down the glare from some of the leaves and giving the greens a more saturated look.
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ReservoirDog A Band Apart More info | Do not crop the top ! Patrice
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Mar 31, 2014 06:38 | #10 I vote original crop. Looks nice and thick with humidity too. Cool shot! 6D | EF 35 f2 IS | EF 50 f1.4 | EF 85 f1.8 | EF 135 f2.0
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jshendel Member 94 posts Joined May 2011 Location: Ankeny, Iowa More info | Mar 31, 2014 12:41 | #11 don't crop. I like it as is www.shendelmanphotography.com
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Mar 31, 2014 13:38 | #12 you people are all wrong! Light L16: http://lightRumors.co
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Mar 31, 2014 15:54 | #13 There's always someone!
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