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Apr 04, 2014 11:57 |  #1

I took these last fall, I have another senior session for a guy coming up tonight so I thought I might get some good feedback on my last time out to see how I can improve.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me:
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Apr 04, 2014 11:58 |  #2

my first impression : fake smile. too much teeth.


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Apr 04, 2014 12:12 |  #3

Yep, He didn't want to be there, his mom tagged along, and it was colder than we expected with some drizzle. So he wasn't in the best smiley mood.


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Apr 04, 2014 15:04 |  #4

robots4joey wrote in post #16809665 (external link)
Yep, He didn't want to be there, his mom tagged along, and it was colder than we expected with some drizzle. So he wasn't in the best smiley mood.

These are the conditions where I might have suggested another time....


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Apr 05, 2014 10:00 |  #5

I'd love to see some more saturation from the staircase in #2.


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Apr 06, 2014 07:59 |  #6

1 and 4 is genuine enough. Sometimes being a portrait photographer is being part comedian :).




  
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Apr 06, 2014 08:25 |  #7

I like the casual poses best.

I would also just add to watch for cutting off the feet. Not a terrible flaw but if you have them there are more options for cropping. I believe this is one of those things that bothers photographers way more than clients.


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