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Apr 14, 2014 11:20 |  #1

You tell me, personally I think the vignetting is a bit much, and the whites seem a bit overexposed...suggesti​ons

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Apr 14, 2014 12:25 |  #2

This image may be better if centered. Vignetting is a little strong.


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Apr 14, 2014 12:41 |  #3

Anything on the composition?


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Apr 14, 2014 13:52 |  #4

Bracetty wrote in post #16832912 (external link)
Anything on the composition?

It's a pretty straightforward image so not too many options. A couple of things, maybe, these might just be different and not better - Get lower, pull back a little so the vases in the front aren't chopped off at the bottom, and then centering as the previous poster said. I think putting this in the center is fine, although there are those rule of thirds people who would disagree.


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Apr 14, 2014 16:04 |  #5
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Light is everything or nearly everything in a image. This light is flat and harsh and we see no shadows which in effect creates dimension on a 2d surface. The temple is beautiful. A recommendation which is likely impossible is to position a flash on one side or the other to produce directional light.




  
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