Maternity Shot

I will probably be giving these another go, but shes only got about 2 months to go. How can I tighten these up for the next shoot, snow is melted but it snowed today so who knows.

Tighten up the sweater. It's too loose to really show the belly well, as seen in shot #2. The second one also doesn't say maternity to me.

Nice shots, but I would open up your aperture if you can. The background is kind of messy, I think it would look cleaner and put the focus on her to blur it out more. The snow right in her focal plane is enough to set the stage. Good luck with round two!