Love to get your ideas on these two shots and the B&W conversion.
What do you prefer?
Suggestions for improvement?
#1
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/ni6YwZ
#2
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/nka3r6
IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/nioCSt
pelooyen Goldmember 2,940 posts Likes: 86 Joined Mar 2010 Location: Sydney More info | Apr 23, 2014 04:12 | #1 Love to get your ideas on these two shots and the B&W conversion. IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/ni6YwZ #2 IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/nka3r6 IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/nioCSt cheers, Paul
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joedlh Cream of the Crop 5,513 posts Gallery: 52 photos Likes: 684 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea. More info | Apr 23, 2014 07:58 | #2 I usually favor color. But there's something about the color shots that doesn't seem right. Maybe too much saturation or over-sharpening. I'm not sure. Zooming in a bit on the wave I think would be more dramatic. It feels like the foreground is drawing attention from it. Joe
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Apr 23, 2014 17:18 | #3 I prefer the color version of #1, although I don't love either version. I feel like the crashing wave is kind of an afterthought in the picture. If there was a super strong foreground element, it would add some extra "oomph" to the image. The foreground here though, is sort of flat.
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Apr 26, 2014 08:24 | #4 davidmtml wrote in post #16856335 I prefer the color version of #1, although I don't love either version. I feel like the crashing wave is kind of an afterthought in the picture. If there was a super strong foreground element, it would add some extra "oomph" to the image. The foreground here though, is sort of flat. I agree! I would crop out the green at the bottom of the photo, it just doesn't add to the image. There isn't anything that really pulls me through this image. One thing is the camera height is rather low so it's difficult to see the depth in this image. This makes the image feel rather flat and uninteresting. This is why having something to get "up on" so you can photograph downward a bit can make or break photographing a scene.
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