Abandoned in West Virginia

If I can offer myself some critique:

-feels a little flat in terms of geometry and perspective. More foreground elements could have been helpful
-negative exposure gradient from the top was a little sloppy--could have re-added exposure on the top of the building so as not to give away the game too much.

Christopher Steven b wrote in post #16861094
If I can offer myself some critique:

-feels a little flat in terms of geometry and perspective. More foreground elements could have been helpful

What was the view if you moved 10 feet to the left. I'm interested to see what's down that courtyard. Maybe some remnants of the prior business? An old vehicle? Or just an empty, cracked drive being taken over by weeds?

Also might want to revisit the location in a month when the grass grows longer.

Christopher Steven b wrote in post #16861094
-negative exposure gradient from the top was a little sloppy--could have re-added exposure on the top of the building so as not to give away the game too much.

Or mask.