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Apr 27, 2014 23:15 |  #1

Anybody have any tips or advice on black & white photography.

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Apr 27, 2014 23:27 |  #2

1- here eyes don't look sharp. perhaps camera shake or missed focus.

2- her white clothing is blown out.

3- not a huge fan of the composition. She's dead center, and the left side of the frame is distracting

these are just my opinion. you are welcome to ignore if you disagree.


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Apr 27, 2014 23:34 |  #3

First thought is the model's clothing is blown out. My second though is what is this a picture of? Not sure if it's supposed to be a portrait, fashion/ed, urban/street.


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Apr 28, 2014 07:06 |  #4

venom3300 wrote in post #16866156 (external link)
1- here eyes don't look sharp. perhaps camera shake or missed focus.

2- her white clothing is blown out.

3- not a huge fan of the composition. She's dead center, and the left side of the frame is distracting

these are just my opinion. you are welcome to ignore if you disagree.

Nah I appreciate it, thats why I posted it here.


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Apr 28, 2014 10:32 |  #5

^ I thinks its worth a reshoot though. thats a neat location.


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Apr 28, 2014 19:33 |  #6

venom3300 wrote in post #16866156 (external link)
1- here eyes don't look sharp. perhaps camera shake or missed focus.

2- her white clothing is blown out.

3- not a huge fan of the composition. She's dead center, and the left side of the frame is distracting

these are just my opinion. you are welcome to ignore if you disagree.

Not sure how you can tell her eyes aren't in focus.....they're very hard to see at all.


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