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May 12, 2014 03:52 |  #1

Any thoughts, comments and suggestions are welcome.

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May 12, 2014 07:31 |  #2

Nice.

Odd, distracting white in-focus blob at bottom right. Is it a focus stack? The small DOF had an odd effect at the bottom greenery - Might (or not?) be better blurred a bit?


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May 12, 2014 08:11 |  #3

I agree. I like it, but there's a small speck on the petals at about 5 o'clock that I'd clone out, too.


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May 13, 2014 12:32 |  #4

Also, remove the spiderweb/string thing coming out at 7 o'clock.


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May 14, 2014 08:37 |  #5

Wow! I am astonished. I have an eye for detail and as an editor, it can be saidd that I am making my life paying attention to detail, but I've never seen these.

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May 14, 2014 08:58 |  #6

Bogac Erkan wrote in post #16903609 (external link)
Wow! I am astonished. I have an eye for detail and as an editor, it can be saidd that I am making my life paying attention to detail, but I've never seen these.

Thank you.

It's always easier for me to see things like that in someone else's shots. But I missed the spider web, too. ; )


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May 19, 2014 23:33 |  #7

I think this is a beautifully done shot. If I had to nitpick, I'd say the specks on the petals but someone mentioned that already. Nicely done.


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May 20, 2014 00:19 |  #8

Thanks for the compliments.




  
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