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I'm all for SEO (keywords), but I think it's a bit overboard, IMO. Other than that it looks good to me.

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memoriesoftomorrow wrote in post #16904913
The home page?

Yes.

I honestly didn't look through all of the pages. Just the home page and your About Me page. The homepage sounds too "SEO" to me.

Hey Peter.

I like the "first comes love then comes marriage" thing above the nav, I think it's really cute and I think potential brides would like that. I also like the fact that you have your phone number in big letters at the top, I don't think enough photographers even have phone numbers.

I do have a couple of things that I'm wondering if you considered:

1) The color of the navigation menu dropdown links are the same as the paragraph texts. I would normally see it the other way around like the paragraph text is neutral colored (ie black on white background) and all the paragraph headers (h1, h2, etc.) and links are unique colors.

2) Would like to see the "Package/Pricing" pages to include a big table at the top that summarizes the words. It would just need to be a table that differentiates the different packages you offer and what those prices are (approximately if needed). Would also remove the slider gallery at the top and just include one eye catching image cropped to a low height like a header image because I think outside of the intro page, the slider takes up too much vertical room.

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memoriesoftomorrow wrote in post #16906197
That red is actually a big part of my branding image. I wear the same colour jeans when I shoot and one of my work cars has a soft top roof the same colour.

I got the color was important but didn't know it was THAT important. I'm trying to imagine the jeans in this color.

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